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Proper, more powerful paragraphingI'm a big believer in short paragraphs. Especially for copy that will be read on-screen or under time pressure. Long paragraphs are difficult for most readers, who are busy, important and like to see a subject divided into segments for quick scanning and navigation. The length issue also becomes more pressing as screen displays narrow, thanks to smartphones and other mobile devices. With a degree of pomposity, the University of Huddersfield, UK, tells us that, "[i]t must be remembered that the purpose of a paragraph is to develop a point or specific theme. With this in mind, a single sentence or two would probably not be sufficient to fulfil this purpose. Development of a point requires discussion and explanation, which suggests that a minimum of five or six sentences is advisable." Codswallop! And if you don't believe me, believe the experts at the Poynter Institute, who assert that ""stories with shorter paragraphs get more than twice as many eye fixations than those with longer paragraphs" and that "the longer-paragraph format discourages reading and that short-paragraph format overwhelmingly encourages [it]..." This is why short paragraphs (1-3 sentences or less) are used in news stories where the emphasis is on reporting information without discussion, and in technical writing where the emphasis is on presenting facts without analysis. Written dialogue also consists of short paragraphs, with a new paragraph for each change of speaker. So, what to do?Here are six rules:
And on that note, thank you for your kind attention. Goodbye, and good luck. Duplicate paragraph removed at 2.20pm on 24 March 2011. About Tiffany MarkmanTiffany Markman is a freelance web and print copywriter, editor and trainer who works for diverse clients, large and small, in South Africa and overseas. She writes regularly for Bizcommunity, tweets prolifically (@tiffanymarkman), reads voraciously (bookreviewsbytiffany.blogspot.com) and is known as a grammar, plain language and SEO nazi. Give Tiffany a shout on cell +27 (0)82 492 1715 or go to www.tiffanymarkman.co.za. View my profile and articles... |